Certainly! Here's the revised version with an expanded reflection: --- My journey to becoming a first-year graduate student in a doctoral program for pharmacy has been shaped by the experiences and challenges I've faced as a first-generation immigrant. When my parents decided to move our family from Egypt to the U.S. when I was 12, they did so with the hope of providing us with a better future. Little did I know that this move would shape my life in profound ways. Adjusting to a new country at a young age was challenging. I had to navigate a different culture, learn a new language, and adapt to an unfamiliar education system. The pressure to succeed was immense, as I wanted to meet the high expectations my family had for me. They sacrificed a great deal to give us this opportunity, and I felt a deep responsibility to make the most of it. Being the first in my family to pursue higher education in the U.S. came with its own set of hurdles. I had to figure out how to navigate the college application process, apply for financial aid, and find my way through a system that was entirely new to me. There were times when I felt overwhelmed, unsure if I was on the right path. But I was determined to succeed, knowing that my success would validate the sacrifices my parents had made. Now, as I pursue my doctoral degree in pharmacy, I reflect on how far I’ve come. My background as an Egyptian immigrant has given me a unique perspective, one that I believe will be valuable in the field of healthcare. I’ve learned the importance of resilience, adaptability, and perseverance—qualities that have not only helped me get to where I am today but will also guide me as I move forward in my career. I’m proud of what I’ve accomplished so far, but I’m also aware that my journey is far from over. I’m committed to excelling in my studies and using my knowledge to make a difference in the world. At the same time, I hope to serve as a role model for others who might be facing similar challenges, showing them that with determination and hard work, they too can achieve their goals. This journey has also deepened my appreciation for the strength and resilience that come from embracing both my heritage and my future.